Bloomed Friendship

  • Bloomed Friendship
    Karyn Indursky

    Our friendship is a rose 
    for who's beauty is delicate, 
    but those thorns will prick you 
    from time to time... 

    Our friendship is a rose 
    for it's gorgeous appearance 
    warms our hearts 
    like a hug... 

    Our friendship is a rose 
    growing from fertilized soil 
    of honesty with gentle
    touches of diction 
    to sprout leaves... 

    Our friendship is a rose
    and when is full bloom
    it's as special as you and me.
     
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nightlight1220's picture

Beautifully said.  ...  

Beautifully said. 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Poetic_Eyes's picture

thanks night

thanks nightlight. i was looking at a picture of a red rose with a blue background and water droplets upon it's petal. it inspired me to write, especially when i've been thinking about who my true friends are and lucky i am to have them.

bishu's picture

I agree with Respected nightlight's two words

I agree with Respected nightlight's two words.All is well till the rose dries & withers & fresh blooming roses are needed.What was that short story by HGWells "Dr Hedigers Experiment" Youth is as we see in the Magic Mirror made by our own imagination.So is friendship if compared with a lovely fresh rose.Why not allow the creations of God to remain on rose bushes instead of offering them as tokens of love & friendship.So many roses will be killed in Mid Feb 2014.In your view friendship is like a blooming rose.So ATU friendship isn't permanent!!Who cries for the raped roses ???? ~~~ I'll sail away from friendship if it means killing roses~~ Your Devilish friend PopEye~


©bishu 

 

nightlight1220's picture

So sad and true, Bishu. Buy

So sad and true, Bishu. Buy potted flowers people can replant if you must ...save the rose!! 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Poetic_Eyes's picture

interesting

interesting feedback. i didn't expect that. thanks for always reading and commenting.