The sea and sun
Must make the grass
If blue and yellow
Make green
Do blood and tears
Make purple smears
Or just the hurt that's seen?
When white snow
Comes from the night
Does it make
Our clouds so grey?
Do you and me = happy
In every single way?
Author's Notes/Comments:
I think I could have come up with a better title, but this was written back when I naively thought that it didn't matter what you named a poem, as long as it had some relevance to the subject at hand. But it has to matter, after all, they are what makes you click on it to read it, right? Nevertheless, I try to refrain from changing original material to fit how I feel now, hence the name still remains.
gd poem n the title is fine- no ready betweens the lineys lol. very clever, i see that ur artistic side reaches to colour as well as poetry lol. but well done terri. i think that is fab!
Real creative poem...I enjoyed reading.
Hello how are you doing? I haven't been on here in ages. A happy new year to you all. I loved this poem but then again all your work is good....regards Betty
(You don't know me, but we both enjoy reading Alison's poetry. (Ali Coliins).
I was reading some of her new poems and I spotted your critiques, I hope you don't mind me reading your poems?!!)
-This is one of my favs of yours as it is really clever.
A sweet little rhyme, (I hope that isn't an insult) So well done!
you read this to me in art i didnt know you were putting it on your site i am glad you have it is excellent
i think this one is really really clever, it'll take me a while to come up with something like that.oh well we can't be all the same at everything.......