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Empty?
An empty room
A hollow heart
A smiling face
When the laughter starts
An empty sky
A dull, dark day
A smiling face
When sun comes our way
An empty heart
No time to bear
A smiling face
When you’re not there
When it comes to hatred,
The world has plenty
When it comes to peace
The worlds just…
Empty.
one word -> nice :) seriously its a really simple poem with a really gd point! erm i suppose it has that word, erm;;;;;; depth thats it tres bien :)
amazing depth, love it. i also really like poems that have fast rhythms due to a list like aproach. i really like this poem.
Hey! I like this poem! It shows such deep meaning in such simple words. Well done!
ali
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Very deep feelings, well written.