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Abandoned
I can't seem to recall
I can't seem to know
I can't hear them
I can't see them
I hurt
I hurt
This solitude stringing
through my heart
tightening moreso
squeezing every last drop
of my life out
I die
I die
They look at me
I reach for them
They frown
I cry more
They walk
I fall
They abandon me
I don't know exactly what you're referring to in this piece but I do know that I can relate to the words as though they were my own. I have been abandoned, I know very well the pain and you've captured the feeling and the emotion perfectly.
Blessings and I hope that this is your muse and not something that you're going through.
Peace & Infinite Blessings,
Nate
sorry i haven't been on in a long time
This particular piece? It relates to something I went through, but just a feeling. I just felt like that was happening to me, but it wasn't as bad as my mind let on. It was rough but I have prevailed. I have a little more faith in life now. But not all my poems are life related. I appreciate the comment though.
I wonder if I have lost my talent for poetry. It's been a long time since I wrote, but I did write a new one whispers in the rain.
Hollie C. Barringer