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Cheap beer and acrid smoke 
blast my tongue 
His hair falls in his eyes 
My consciousness moves upward 
Emptying first my feet 
then finally, my head 
Either he is too quiet 
or my mind is too loud 
Recognizing my confusion 
he spreads me open himself 
I cannot look into his hungry eyes 
He wants me to love him 
To give him more than he can receive 
His heart is too full of soot 
And I am a mirage 

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Free-Spirited_Wolf's picture

Great write 

Great write 


*~Be Legendary ~ Ian Mascoe*

AkulaTHEPoet's picture

Surprisingly the first comment.

This is really good stuff! It is surprising that nobody else has commented in appreciation, I look forward to seeing more, excellent start!


Спасибо! Я благодарю!