Those broken wings, Those broken promises

Those broken wings.
Those broken promises.
That fake Love. For me,
All seemed so true, that I lived
Sparkling for days, just for you.

I believed you,
Unaware of the mask,
That hid the real
You, trusting you with
My heart, only to find
The fake love In you.

The angel in me bumped
Up in joy, when she was
Touched by a star, Which
Led her to accomplish the task,
The task Which the devil left,
Unattended, in the sky.

I went ahead to find him,
In his most mesmerizing
Beauty, a beauty any human
Would fall for. But it had
It's own share of pain to give.

He made me believe In Love,
In hope, in lust, in life,
He made me live a moment
Of my life, my favorite t'was.

Then the storm of infidelity hit him,
He lost his emotions, his Love
For me, He chose the wrong
Upon the right, leaving me
Devastated, alone in the night.

I stopped him hard, reminding him
Of our bond, our Love,
He said He wanted her,
And He loved her. I told him
I'd be broken, for I Love him
Deeply, crying aloud and feebly.

He didn't care, for He walked
Out on me, leaving the door
Open, for me to realize it
Was over. And it was Then I
Realized, No Love is true.

Those broken wings.
Those broken promises.
That fake Love. For me,
All seemed so true, that I lived
sparkling for days, just for you.

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Great poem that tells a

Great poem that tells a story. I feel like I can feel the emotions you felt and that makes for good writing, great job!

Doodle_Dudette's picture

Thank you so so much hon.

Thank you so so much hon.