Night Sounds

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2011 Poetry

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Night Sounds

Dusk,
land dims,
night begins.
Creatures do their
thing.

Dusk,
faint moon
above the
night’s horizon.
Bats screech and take to flight with furry wing.

© 2011 Philip N. Carcione
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Author's Notes/Comments: 

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Stacked Poem

First Form: Lanturne

The Lanturne is a five-line verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one, two, three, four, one.

It is a short shape poem from Japan describing a specific one syllable noun, such as a feeling, a thing, or an abstract idea.

The purpose of the lantern poem is to illuminate the subject and re-imagine or personalize it for the reader, not just to simply define it.

Second Form: Tetractys

Tetractys should express a complete thought, profound or comic, witty or wise, using 20 syllables. 5 lines with a syllable count of...

1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 10

The "1 syllable" line must be a proper, interesting word.... nothing like "a" or "the"
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Should be centered but can't do that here at this time.

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LadyRaine's picture

I like this a lot too Phil,

I like this a lot too Phil, besides your perfect form
I love the mysterious feel too it all...much enjoyed

phil_carcione's picture

Thanks Roxy

............always nice to see you come by!

heatherburns35's picture

night sounds

this one I like alot. I like the structure. Might try these some day. thanks Phil.

phil_carcione's picture

Thanks for the read.

Thanks for the read.