Naked Question

2008 Poetry

I’m running nude,

am I crude…. or

just screwed when caught.

Author's Notes/Comments: 


A Than-Bauk, conventionally a witty saying or epigram,
is a three line "climbing rhyme" poem of Burmese origin.
Each line has four syllables. The rhyme is on the fourth syllable
of the first line, the third syllable of the second line, and the
second syllable of the third line.

ie: Syllable count:

4 - 4 - 4

Rhyme Scheme:

x - x - x - a

x - x - a - x

x - a - x - x

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I think this is funny and it reminds me of the song the streak way back years ago.. hahalol..