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The Ultimate Pleasure
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Erotica Laying there with magic wand in hand
Using it to give all the pleasure she can
Applying it gently to where it feels best
Pressing it harder as she begins to crest
Moving it slowly around her little bud
Till she can feel her senses start to flood
Then backing off to prolong the act
While feeling her entire body react
Inserting it in her most private part
Again she can feel it begin to start
Pleasure building deeply within
Spreading outward toward her skin
Grinding herself against its vibrating head
Fantasizing that it's flesh and blood instead
Breathing now heavy, and a bit erratic
Body beginning to shudder now that it's climactic
Shaking, moaning, and beginning to sweat
Her little bud and below now extremely wet
Convulsing, then laying fully content
Her body and desires completely spent
I absolutely LOVE this one, I can really "relevise" (my word for relate) to it.
Running through the lines quickly, I like to apply gently at first and then press harder when inflicting rapturous orgasmic pain on myself, as I start to feel my senses flood I TRY to back off to prolong the act whilst feeling my entire body react but I just want the orgasm RIGHT AWAY, immediately, although the elongating of each individual ecstasy-inducing sensory reaction would be fantastic in that it would intensify the whole wondrously pleasurable experience, and anything that intensifies my pain and the reactions I have to it is all I want right now (sorry, my algolagnia knows no bounds right now, I'm actually finding it really hard to critique this luscious poem of yours at the moment, there's things I want to do BADLY) (I'm addicted).
"Shaking, moaning, and beginning to sweat
Her little bud and below now extremely wet
Convulsing, then laying fully content
Her body and desires completely spent" - these lines don't even need comment from me, and as I'm unable to comment - or even THINK - right now, I'll shoot on.
Amazing work, well done.
Dolores, the sweet algolagniac xxxxxxx