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Fallen angel weeps,
head bowed with hands by her side.
Shame emanates from her breath.

God inhales her breath,
as she slowly rises in light.
All is forgiven tonight.

 

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Sedoka

The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.

Katauta is an unrhymed three-line poem the following syllable counts: 5/7/7.

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last updated 25 December 2010 - 5:17pm
©25 August 2010 - 1:58pm — phil_carcione
26 October 2010 - 1:40am — heatherburns35
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Forgiven

beautiful poem Phil.....nice work.

19 November 2010 - 9:49pm — phil_carcione
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Thankies!

Thankies!