Starless Skies And Parting Words

By Peter Christopher Raymond

 

Copyright 2013

 

Would I be disowned and roundly condemned

If I were to hasten my own end

While years disappear I wilt from the guilt

Finding no pleasure in the shrines I've built

Unrelenting correction and cuts no longer mending

Loud disapproval of my leisurely spending

Wishing I just didn't give a lick

But your judgements stick and the damage is quick

I no longer find solace in my favorite haunts

I just sit there dispensing the intended response

You just carve away layers to uncover my core

But my sweet candy center isn't there anymore

Flirting with the trifles which you treat as though taboo

Fundamental fears which scare you through the through

Dire ruminations I ought to not disclose

You stood by my side 'til we stood opposed

My money poorly spent on nothing permanent

A filthy deviant with no will to repent

Breathing grows shallow as eyes narrow

No longer feeling the pierce of your arrows

Dismay betrayed by a tranquil expression

Afraid to reveal my inner affections

In this life I've frequently strayed from the course

Shouting myself hoarse in heated discourse

In slight compromise there's little I've gained

Just lasting resentment and utter disdain

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nightlight1220's picture

This is so good. I think we

This is so good. I think we all reach the point of taking a decent inventory at one time or another....how else would we know life is "do or die"??? 

 

Loved it.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Thank you very very much! :)

Thank you very very much! :)

Affirmation's picture

Bravo! Excellent work, your

Bravo! Excellent work, your imagery and flow are very precise in your work. Your resolve ties everything together.

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Thank you very very much! :)

Thank you very very much! :)