Blossom

4-7-08



Even as the winter frost

Devours your beauty

Do not fear

It will come again

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is a metaphor. I think, subjectively, everyone can relate to.

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Bryan Adam Tomimbang's picture

Another thing to add, this piece very closely resembles a dodoitsu poem with the 7-7-7-5 syllabic beat and seasonal and metaphorical attribution. It's best suitable and could be changed, but only a suggestion.