Answers with a meaning

It's time. It's time to move on and break old habits
Find your own space as the world gets crowded
Confusion is just a phase
You will soon realize things and go different ways
Stopping to smell the roses
Go out, find other people who knows it
Or people who don't, to get a different view
Staying along the same path, and always being you
Friends and family, thought are closer than ever
But you still stand your own ground, as people are clever
Friends masked as enemies. Who just want to bring you down
And you kill with them with kindness, not letting them see you frown
You are you, because god made it that way
But god will give you the answers, when ? I can't say
So now, it's all about trusting and believing
And one day, he will show you, the answers with a meaning.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I'd really appreciate honest feedback. Be as blunt as possible.

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I liked this but for me two things

I need to bring to your attention - and you did say blunt :)

This following area needs tightening or development to make it clearer:---

---Staying along the same path, and always being you
Friends and family, thought are closer than ever
But you still stand your own ground, as people are clever
Friends masked as enemies. Who just want to bring you down ---

---Friends and family, thought are closer than ever --- seems to come out of nowhere all of a sudden it just hangs there. Maybe it needs a line before or after it to make more clearer?

The other thing is still in this area is --- friends masked as enemies--- should be enemies masked as friends. People pretending to be your friends as the old adage goes "keep your friends close, and your enemies even closer!" the rest is really good! :D

Ultimately if you are happy with it that's really all that matters. You know what it means to you. I hope it helps rather than hinders cheers SS.


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