My Place

I had been to this place

where blooms immersed

by the glimmer of the moon

and scent is whiffed across

the vastness of my delirium

Yes! I had been to this place

where blades of the grass

yield to my ironic state

everything else follows me

in search for lost tranquility

Indeed, I had been to that place

where bloom’s scent can be retraced

between the expanse of my space

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Written 05 Feb. '08

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Afzal Shauq's picture

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