2004 Poetry

You paint your love

with a hue more like a shade

where gray is the ground

that holds my faith

far are your visions…of us

that no assurance can be found

everyday struggles for itself

I leave my fate to fate

If you are meant for me

Then we are meant to be

written 2/16/04

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This poem comes to me at a time when fate has played a very big role in my life. I was totally enthralled and almost shocked at how much each line there made perfect sense. No bigger poetry than experience, huh. Very well written with perfect and crystal clear sense. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.