Tanka--JEALOUSY

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Sweet and sour effect

I turn to sweet when you’re here

With me and turn to

Sour when you’re not beside me

Can’t help it, do pardon me


Author's Notes/Comments: 

written 6/13/03

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The destructive power of Jelousy is found in the mythology of Hercules and Dijanari:

http://www.postpoems.com/cgi-bin/displaypoem.cgi?pid=192973
I love this tanka as well.