Cinquian--DANDELIONS

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cinquian/tanka

treading

in the patio

smell of soft dandelions

yellow hue permeates in my

nostrils

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written 6/13/03

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Katrina Ann's picture

i like that ... it's simple, sweet, and some of your wording is unusual =) nice work