2002 Poetry

Life is like a candle

Full of light and spectacle

Its shines glow endlessly

Bringing bright left and right

So waste not a precious life

Live it by giving light to another life

For just like a candle life liquefies

So quick that you wouldn’t even notice

That the candle melted with the time

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Mike G Gaines's picture

yeah candles dont live forever and nor do we i love the thouhgt of this poem and the poem too. and i tottally agree with it. and to capture that thouhgt with oh so few words its amazing. keep the pen up and write more