I LOVE TO SUCK YOU :)

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I LOVE TO SUCK YOU :)

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2001 Poetry

you that my tongue drool for

my lips crave for your long ness

and sleekness standing up

straight before me

your scent is like a magnet

that’s just driving me crazy

with closed eyes I wonder

my mouth through your bottom

can’t help but feel, lick and

suck you in and out

and when I am through

when there’s nothing left of you

yet my mind still want to muse

the bliss, the woes and blues

I would reach out for a lighter

and lit another one of you

Author's Notes/Comments:

His name is Marlboro, sometimes Winston sometimes Seven star

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:03am
©5 April 2002 - 6:44am — pangan_l_l

13 May 2004 - 5:16pm — Joel

Humorously cool!

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"You think Einstein walked around thinking everyone was a bunch of dumb-shits?"

28 September 2003 - 1:10pm — Corey Fox (not verified)

this is a good poem. good writing and good for a laugh! the surprise ending - love it! one love Corey & co

14 July 2003 - 9:57am — taffy

Hello You had me worried for a minute or two, a great poem with a terrific twist at the end. I had to chuckle,then this guy passing down the pavement (sideWalk) stopped and lit up, he must have wondered what that idiot sitting in front of an open window was laughing at.

25 September 2002 - 3:36am — Hayles Comet (not verified)