SCAFFOLDING OF RHYME

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JOURNAL # 41

sometimes it's like
looking through the toppled hourglass
we share a vendetta of words
almost
like a 'Scaffolding Of Rhyme'
your thoughts though potent
still you paint them
for me somewhat pearl shy
and canvas weary
I have trouble dusting back your veil
the glitter keeps getting on my fingers
and fractured vague ideas of you
are difficult to see through
your pleasure appears as porous to me
yet you can seem so deep
even while standing in the shallowest puddle
is such vision a gift or a trick on the eye
you seem to be the most easily difficult
fellow I've ever had the pleasure to
have sort of met
you are a puzzle of humanity
that could give the crossword
section of the New York times fits
madame Curie Couldn't solve you
enigmatic is but a parking spot
for your daring double talk
you foster compliments
cause flattery wouldn't have you
unless you were gold engraved
so the more and more I talk to you
the less and less I know your story
but for the part where you confessed
you adore a poetess like me
we both know that was a vagabond
of a statement
but you said it with such vivacity
that I couldn't break the will of
your obvious concentration
you seem to see me in a light
that I don't even know the name of
that baffles me at so many levels
but it's also rather beautiful to know
so thank you for not unleashing
the demons in you that we both
are aware that I, myself could not handle............
(Sept. 26, 2011 439am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

written for my poet friend PC Bodh. we were sharing our ideas on poetry, friendship, and the nuances and special circumstances of writing and writing's general inspiration and this poem came to me as a sort of thank you to him for all he said and the wisdom he tried to impart on me. In the moment I felt he spoke in some intellectual's riddle form but as I gazed back through the gauzy curtain of my recent memories I realized he was trying to let me know he held me in such high poetic esteem so thank you my friend I hope this poem reflects that back to you some tenfold. You are a caring talent that any reader could not soon forget if they were but given the chance to rest their eyes upon your eloquent word constructions...................

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