gazing upon
these words
of you and she
a sense of
one strangling wisdom
in the hands
of two people
just came to me
it was quite lovely in form
but sad and out of sync
to be so beautifully adorned..........
(Sept. 8, 2009 1032am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

(my poetic reply to fellow post poems poets Muhammad Naveed Ahmed and Deborah Russell's poem 'A Discussion'

please note I found this old poetic reply quite by accident and when I happened upon it I did not believe I had posted it on my web page and I checked and sure enough I had not so I did not want to leave one of my 'precious offspring' ( laughs) locked out of the family home and so I have copied it from Sir Poet's site and brought it to its rightful home.

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