'I So Agree'
this world is not
for those hearts so free
each day lived
upon such negative plain
more and more wisdom
arrives certainly
yet more and more virtue
gets slain
rabid dogs they howl
the cowering night
shivers in fright
a new day dawns
and hearts that bled
beg then openly
for some respite
an but then the eyes close
and misery she goes
off for a walk away from
the light
leaving the believers to believe
that God indeed loves the likes
of you and me
and he leaves us not here for no reason
but for the highest level of all love's decree
the supreme evolution of each our thankful souls
so to reiterate
yes, my dearest of all sirs
I Do So Agree!............
(May 25, 2010 234am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

my poetic reply to fellow post poems poet Muhammad Naveed Ahmed's poem 'Two Different Worlds'

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