AN ABRASIVE PERSUASION CORRECTED

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JOURNAL #33

how he wears his wounded heart

so stoically upon his finely chiseled

face

such prominence beneath those sullen

edges of pain

to the sensitive eye

quite easy enough to trace

that vacant blue stare

the pale plane of a once so proud cheek

the set of a granite jaw

seems out of place when

compared to those aching eyes so

hollow yet meek

that mask of polite indifference

how for others comfort he slips it

off then on at startling intervals

for the love of God

the man, a captain no less, is a

walking treasure of masculinity

and all that such adornments to a male

specimen allows

and then we look at her

a docilely lead tender mouse of a woman

who's happiness was butchered before its

rightful time to soar

her loss so great

she's eight years since lived in the shadows

why of even her self

a door mat for her family and little more

few prospects and even less else

his return

a fiery painful reminder

deep in her womanly breast

of her youthful misleading

by experienced others

who diminished their blossoming love

in the wake

of what they, themselves considered right

and good for a girl of her age and status

at the tender turn of just nineteen

now at twenty and seven

through a flick of fate's remarkable hand

her Captain once is back

and through a painful field of sporadic

interaction

the flame leaps to life to burn again

blessed are those who's hearts

even in once hopeless spiral

to an excruciating end

are able to recapture that one

great abiding love

and enjoy it to its fullest felt life

once again...............

(Jan. 23,2008 1105pm)




Author's Notes/Comments: 

inspired by the Jane Austin  book 'Persuasion'...........

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