Goodbye brother!

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poetry of 2005

Goodbye brother!



Forget you

You’re suppose to be

To my brother

You’re suppose

Love me,

Respect me,



But instead you critique

And rip my heart with the harsh

Tone of voice you talk to me in.

Like I’m not human or not allowed

To make a few mistakes every now and than!

You have to talk over me and don’t let me

Explain. And you act like I’m stupid and I don’t

  Know anything!



The worse part of all this is I feel like

You hate me! When you look at me

With those eyes so cold they could pierce anybody’s

Soul! And a stare so cold you can kill anybody

If they look at you too close. You’ve hurt me

More then anybody I’ve never told anybody these words before that I’m about to say but I looked up to you!

I use to brag to everybody about

What a great brother I had!



I feel like that great guy I once called my brother no longer exist. With these words being said since you wanna treat me like I’m a nobody I think it’s best if we

Say goodbye but always remember I do love you and I’m your sister and I always will be!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i wrote this about my brother and the way he makes me feel at times when i try so hard all the time!

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im really sorry that your brother treats u like that . i have 2 brothers and one is like my best friend and my other brother is an asshole . he totally treats me like dirt and thinks hes better than me. he always criticises me and never helps me out when i need help. he lives with my parents even though he is 26 and he thinks he runs their house. god bless u and i wouldnt even bother with him. brothers are assholes.