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Maybe!!!
If I would have looked at things from every point of view
Maybe if id have taken the time to see her for who she was
I would not be in the pain I’m in now.
Maybe she made mistakes and I made mine
But love is fragile like glass
Turn the wrong way just once and it can be shattered
Give up and fight they are so different but so the same
If only I would have fought when I needed
The woman I loved wouldn’t have walked away
And this pain would never have come
Sometimes it’s easier to run then be with the one
If maybe id have shown her how I felt more
And thought of myself less, life wouldn’t be a waste
Just maybe she would not be gone!
But I looked away I let the pain in
And the pain closed my heart and now she is gone
Love got me in and love threw me out.
Casper McConkie
7-19-2010
Good use of words, well written. I would suggest using some grammar to break it up more evenly, but I definitely feel the pain in this piece. Bravo!
yeah i have a real issue with
yeah i have a real issue with using grammer when im lost in an emotional state but thank you for your feedback
To thine own Self Be true