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A Bit Of Knowledge, Hard-Learned



A Bit Of Knowledge, Hard-Learned







There's no such thing as "false" hope.



Hope either is or isn't.



There's no more chance for him to lie.



He did.--But said he didn't.



The tie is cut.  It's broken.



All hope is finally gone.



But I am better without him,



Than with him but still alone.











Music: Ain't That A Shame


Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is from that old old notebook in the drawer....1990, I think.

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©17 March 2002 - 11:26pm — onelilartist
9 July 2003 - 4:13pm — Linda Hayes (not verified)
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Short and to the point.

8 April 2002 - 11:22pm — Lesa Gay (not verified)
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So you have one of those old notebooks too! I started a new one a few years back after loosing some of my favorites in a move.

This is a work that I think everyone can realate to. Very well written of course as everything you do is.

Breaking the ties does not always help the heart to forget or feel less alone.

Very good as always.
~Lesa~

19 March 2002 - 2:21am — kat
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Very nice, short and sweet. Certianly can relate....except for that tie that's cut....still working on that.

18 March 2002 - 9:59pm — Melissa Rives (not verified)
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Oh this is perfectly worded. I can definitely say I've been there. Thanks so much for your comments on mine today. I'll be reading your other new ones as well, and email anytime you want! Thanks, Melissa