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Are These Tears for Me or You?
Folder:
Concrete-Make Their Own Shape I
see
awful
hurting
wet tears
Falling so-o
Quickly, oh,
so, Sad!!
SAD U
are
gone
and I, I
am left all
alone to cry
these tiny but
bitter, hard tears
for you. I ache. I
sigh. O God I
hurt for you,
and then
I cry.
I
cry
tears
because
I can’t do a
single thing
to change
what has I
been do
not
even
try the
answer
others
tell. I
can b
u
t-
so
sadly
sigh and
cry. Lord,
I do CRY
for you.
You.
Shape poems can be really fun. I liked reading your teary one.
Kris
Jessica.
Your water painting with words is exquisite. Those tears will not dry, weighted as they are with sad emotions.
Some people wring out the wetness, others write it out. We are lucky that you chose as you did.
Thank you for posting.
F. Salphire
I guess somtimes we all feel like crying, even if it is only tears of joy...
"To be human is to feel... One cannot feel completely without tears"
I love the shape of this~~
Peace and love ~~~~ Dougie ~~~
Jessica, very well written, too sad that this concrete must be so wet.
Hi Jessica,
Another great poem ! Very artistic and original. I love the idea of paiting a picture with your poems.
Keep up the good work. I hope this one is another winner if you submit it.
Take Care,
Yvonne
jessica those lok like sweet tears. I wish I could make picturs out on lines like you did. the kind that help heal scars. I like this one. Mary Lamb.
Hi Jessica,
Nice poem. I liked the teardrop images also.
Aren't we lucky, in a way, that as women we can cry whenever we feel the need to?
And, so many reasons too.