Self-Analysis

What's wrong with me?

Is it my looks?

Have I not flash enough?

Have I no fire?  Do I repell?

What caused this grand rebuff?

I've searched my heart,

Re-lived my life,

And now I understand!

There WAS one missing quality!!

YOU never were a MAN!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This was an outlet for anger and therapy for my betrayed heart.

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salphire5's picture

Isn't it amazing ahow crushed and defeated we can feel after the breakdown of a relationship. How we are so ready to accept that the fault is within us? How we search and self analyze and suffer? Until finally it dawns. It is their loss.
I hope this poem did indeed help alleviate some of that pain. He never deserved you at all! You are a wonderful and gifted person.
Super writing Jessica.
Fleur