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The Moment I Loved You
It wasn't what you said to me--
Smooth words like waving grass.
It wasn't in your heated gaze
That warmed like sun through glass.
It happened unexpectedly.
I know when, but not why.
You held me gently in your arms,
And silent, let me cry.
Your explanation changed my original tangent, butI still love the poem.
I think the most touching is the image of silence while you cry! Awesome! ~Tim
That's the true key, isn't it? Too bad more men don't understand. Shut up, listen, and let them cry. Works for me. :)
Good poem, Jessica
Kim
This is really very nice. James