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Head(Acrostic)
H ands and knees
E ating reality's erect shaft of hypocrisies,ejaculation
A dmitting it gave Eve the power
D eserting all inhibitions
H ands and knees
E ating reality's erect shaft of hypocrisies,ejaculation
A dmitting it gave Eve the power
D eserting all inhibitions
This is tight, I enjoyed it.
This is a very rare acrostic poem. I've never quite enjoyed reading them before this one. Your poem sings it's own song, but it's not sweet and hynotizing. It's raw and vocalized. I like how you're not afraid to be different with your work and express yourself. It shows the strength of your personality.
This is excellent.