Remember ( i fell)

Remember baby when i told you

I liked you, 5 minutes ago

you said you loved me

and 15 seconds later i held my

breath and prayed to God

that he would take me 'home'

21 days ( you know) i promised

i'd fall in love with you

but 42 days later i never

promised i wouldnt fall out of

love with you



Remember darling 20 minutes after

we first met you held my hand

and i knew that i'd see you again

45 seconds, i fell behind the counter

smashed and hoping that i'd die

tonight, but 56 minutes into the night

you took me home and held me

wouldnt let me die (thank you by the way)



Remember sweety... i never use to say that

i was always shy with words

but after 1 night with you

i dont think i'll ever have that

problem again (catch my drift)

25 minutes, 2 girls, baking cookies

it doenst matter what the ending looks like



I fell in love with you

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Allison Rice's picture

aww, how sweet!

Paul Geihm's picture

Well, beautiful, this time, I don't know if I understand your work as well as I'm supposed to, but for what I understand of it, I like it a lot (but not quite as much as I do you).

Debra Baker's picture

really good use of time here, well done