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Kiss it away
didn't i shut the door
when i walked out
on the unfortunate
mishap
of breaking your heart?
No one wants to be alone
at christmas time
shoulda killed the cat
when you know
we all had the chance
One pair of candy lips
and your bubble gum tongue
miss those days
kiss them baby
kiss them all away
didn't i shut the door
when i walked out
on the unfortunate
mishap
of breaking your heart?
No one wants to be alone
at christmas time
Beautiful beautiful beautiful. Good job. I commend thee. The only thing I would have changed, but that doesn't mean you should.. the one thing that I would have done differently if I were you is make it "the unfortunate mishap that you've become". Again, just a preferene. Please don't change it because I said that. This was a great poem.