A little note for all of you

i shouldn't

no not right now

i couldn't

no i better not say





i'm forgotten and i'm lost i've said it all before, so if your not in hate iwth me tell me that you love me, show me that you care. I'm so fragile and i'm breaking so quickly and your all part of the process. I wish you could see this and how i'm feeling  now. I know i'm not writing poetry, but i'm telling you all how i feel. I'm saddened and i'm just so angry and i hate the world around me. No one gives a rip and no ones around to care. So i guess that when i write this you'll see my point of view, you'll understand me. just try to undersatnd me


Author's Notes/Comments: 

just try

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anastasia's picture

i understand you i really do no ones perfect and im pretty sure we all have bad sad things that we all go through but i guess this is the way life is most live by the nife or the blade or even worse or more but till we die what more can we do but cry silent sad tears!!!

Sheena Zinzer's picture

I love you and sometimes I feel the same way. Your not alone in how you feel. There are people to comfort you.

charles's picture

what you wrote is poetry,its called free verse