!VOMIT!

throwing up the past



Into the toilet of relief



Barfing out the pain



Relieving the unjust hurt



Puking out the insanity



Taking in the truth



Through prescribed filth



Tasting like my own vomit



I'm not one to complain



But this life really sucks

Author's Notes/Comments: 

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elizabeth's picture

i like this one love.

Gerald Rinks's picture

I understand from my point of view, that sometimes you have to cough up the past inorder to relieve yourself of the insanity of some experiences. This is my experience and it sounds a little like yours. Nice and expeexpressive language and true to the point.

Johannah Doll's picture

I'm not sure if I understand this poem correctly or not. Are you throwing up because you hate yourself or your past?

Megan K.'s picture

I get what you mean. Sometimes I just want to get rid of the past and even sometimes the present. This is a good analogy. Keep up the good work!

megan k