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Simple Words

Simple words

  Spoken

Simple smiles

  Flashed

Simple words

  Yelled

Simple smiles

  Faded

Simple words hurt more than you thought

Simple smiles worth so much more

The words were simple, but they hurt

More than you'll know

Your simple words, killed my simple smile

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Its simple and def. not sweet

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 11:35pm
©3 January 2002 - 6:15pm — oh_so_odd
11 June 2002 - 9:58am — Jody Pratt (not verified)
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Spectacular. Simple, short, to the point, and sweet. I love it.

28 March 2002 - 10:35pm — Josh Glasgow (not verified)
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Wow. That was a great poem.

4 January 2002 - 6:15pm — Marianne Chrisos (not verified)
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Very good. I know what you mean. I'm listening to Otown...I wish someone would stab me. Love, Marianne