Poetic Guesses

You deserve nothing but happiness..

I'm glad your weekend went as planned

I heard you went to the beach...

How was it?

Humn let me make a few poetic guesses...

Was it the best fingers & toes through

sand? Twirling of tongue's together!!

Massage's of pearly wet spots..

rolling of fingers through your curly hairs..

Whutcha do?

Listen to each other breath through

the melody of your heart beats playing drums!

Was it times invested well spent?



Was it beautiful? Watching the birds fly

through the sunrise!!

OR!!Did the angels tears fall outta the sky

in the shape of raindrops?I hope it was

beautiful as the stars & the moon

kissing in the night..

Did you watch the waves in the ocean rise?

Did u watch the patterns in clouds form

Mysterious shapes?

Muh bad don't mean to be nosy!

I was just curious how your date went

as i sit through these Poetic Guesses....

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hi there,
its great to hear from you agian. I am at limited time on the internet my computer is broken and i am stuck with work's laptop. I realy enjoyed this peice, it was very creative and discriptive. i will critique more of your stuff when i have my home pc back. Rae