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I Thought
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closet boxes 2010 I never thought my heart would mend
as bruises tend to heal,
I thought the scars would cover me
the blood would not congeal.
I thought that I would feel alone
for all the days i'll live,
for who could ever want me
when I had nothing left to give.
I tried to sink into my well
of darkness and despair,
to feel the solice of the pain
that none care to repair.
I thought it was the end for me
and now I find i'm wrong,
I feel that I came back the day
you finally came along.
"I never thought my heart would mend
as bruises tend to heal,
I thought the scars would cover me
the blood would not congeal."
BRILLIANT!
"I thought that I would feel alone
for all the days I'll live,"
I'll bugs me its to short, maybe left to life, or I've left to live or something
"for who could ever want me
when I had nothing left to give."
you get me!
"I tried to sink into my well
of darkness and despair,
to feel the solice of the pain
that none care to repair."
uhm do you mean cares? that word bugs me...can repair would sound a lot better, otherwise this is also BRILLIANT!
"I thought it was the end for me
and now I find i'm wrong,
I feel that I came back the day
you finally came along."
the wording in this just flows poorly, I think and now I'm finding I'm wrong flows better, and the day that you finally came along would fix it alot too
but over all this is BRILLIANT! and awesome and stolen me feelings!
I love you
ash
Much Love
Ashley
Marry me Nicole!
ash
Much Love
Ashley