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One Day in Heaven
Tears are nothing when your there
I find someone in me
who has the strength and courage
that most never get to see.
I marvel at your wisdom
so far beyond your years
you don't escape your common truths
your not afraid of fear.
One day in heaven I will know
that you were my true me
reflecting all the perfect things
I never got to be.
I'll still never be sorry
though those words may ring untrue
life was so much richer
from the moment I had you.
If heavens not my destination
please look down from time to time
remember how I loved you
long ago when you were mine.
k i love it
"One day in heaven I will know
that you were my true me
reflecting all the perfect things
I never got to be"
awsome babe
Much Love
Ashley
ok nikki
this relaly onmly applies to the one, cus tghe other u never u never really had. u are exagratigna little maybe?? no one is anyone because people dot belongot to others, we are not objects and that is what i get teh impression of in this poem. "from the moment I had you" u dont have anyone cus if u did you woudlnt be writing a poem about being hurt or lettign go...wahtever.
like i said in my last critique go talk to bj, that is all who u seem to talk to, u dont even come to me, so iam not even goign to ask u too. .u call when i know u want to talk , yet u dont say anything, so now i am not even goign to ask u too
Belinda