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What does it mean to say "I love you"?



That I trust you?

That I care?

That I accept you for who you are?

That I understand you?

That I believe in your dreams?

That I would follow you through hell?

That I would bring you back?

That i'll wait for you?

That I can't live without you?

That my life isn't the same without you there?

That i'll be there forever?

That i'll be your slave?

That i'll never love anyone else?



If this is what love really means, I hope that I never find it because I wouild be the mos unhappy place on earth.If this is love I will never love you.


Author's Notes/Comments: 

I know that this isn't really a poem but I felt I should get iy out of my head anyway.

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roadgrog's picture

hello,

Ah love, if it were so simply defined then we would have an unfullfilled life without the hunt for it.

Why would it be so awful to have some of these things?

if this is all it were it would be a fruitless tree, however ( if i can step out of critique and into emotion) withpout some of these things the fuits would not taste as sweet. exception is the slave part.

my personal point of view

However, i really enjoyed the lay out of question upon question and it really builds like a snowball.

you might want to watch your spelling in the last section. (Pot calling the kettle black)

Gregor

running_with_rabbits's picture

no love is being thankful for them no matter how short or long they stay

love is alot more but punk kinda takes away the whole poetical me

ash


Much Love

Ashley

Belinda's picture

nikki
lve is some much more then that...love cnt be described on what a person does but it is more of a feeling and it cant be put into words, only through affection. love is complictaed and hard to explain...but dont give up and never say never
Belinda