Liar

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closet boxes 2002

You said you never cared

but your eyes say that you lied

I want to know the truth

but your feelings want to hide.

You say that you don't want me

but still you gaze so longingly

your love, so pure and deep

rivals the deepest seas.

You say you will not kiss my lips

but you bite your own to stop

but as the days all pass you by

will you come out on top.

You say that you will not come back

but you don't want to go

I do not see why you still lie

your feelings all I know.

You say that you don't care

that you will never want me

well I feel bad for you

and how unhappy you will be.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I you care, show it
If you don't, tell them
DON'T LIE!!!!

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Brandon Ashe's picture

well i like the frist little bit becaus ethats what i feel like when i'm around you. I bite my lip to keep myself from trying to kiss you or that. i know you probally already noticed that but i thought you should know

Love Ya
Brandon

running_with_rabbits's picture

i like it but you change the rhyme too much

ash


Much Love

Ashley