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How Does It Feel
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closet boxes 2002 How does it feel to know you've destroyed me
to know that you've caused me pain
to see the person you have made me
to know that you drive me insane.
How does it feel to hear my cries
to see the tears stream down my face
to know what you do is wrong
to put me in this painful place.
How does it feel to go to sleep
knowing i'll do the same in tears
to see the pain within myself
when I can not look in the mirror.
How does it feel to say goodbye
to a person you put in the grave
'cause her depression started with you
without that, would have been saved.
How does it feel to hear these words
especially if they are for you
the fact that you must carry on
and the fact that it's all true.
Hey,
You're starting to sound like you're little sis every day.
Great poem.
Kendall
wow -
this is the kind of poem i've always wanted to write to the people that have hurt me over the years ...
great job - keep it up!
maggie
Perfectly written, and one of those messages we all feel like sometimes. i look forward to reading mroe!
some parts i dont' like much but over all its not bad
i love the lines
"to know that you've caused me pain
to see the person you have made me
to know that you drive me insane."
and
"How does it feel to hear my cries
to see the tears stream down my face
to know what you do is wrong
to put me in this painful place."
and
"How does it feel to go to sleep
knowing i'll do the same in tears"
and last but not least
"How does it feel to say goodbye
to a person you put in the grave"
love ya always
ash
Much Love
Ashley