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This Carousel
One more tear slips down my cheek
a tear for each and every day
where I am lost here without you
how bad I feel, I can not say.
Still can't find words to describe
how your my greatest fear
know that your gone, it's for the best
but I still wish that you were near.
Pictures running through my mind
of nighttime walks with all our friends
the best times now gone so soon
wonder haw this ride did end.
Well, yes I do, you fell for her
forgot feelings of you and me
and when she leaves you'll want me back
but this carousel I will not lead.
Okay, that one was disappointing. You've stayed true to your rhyming most the time, and I'm glad that you do that. No one else in the world rhymes their poems. I've strayed from it recently, actually. At about "Pictures running through my mind" you stopped rhyming, and the end's just kind of abrupt and makes no sense. This carousel I will not lead? What? Anyway, for once I am disappointed.
its was good and bad at parts
but i liked it
ash
Much Love
Ashley