Deserved

Folder: 
closet boxes 2010

Everythings been rent assunder

time has passed,

though still I wonder

had I given it my all

if I have, did you deserve it?



Behind the guilt seen in my eyes

there's something more,

could it be lies

that I had no real plans to tell

I know I have, and you deserved it.



Now we speak, glibly and guarded

could it be wrong,

that we have parted

and if you'll have no more of me

that's fine, I do deserve it.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

bear with me folks....this is the first thing I have written in a very long time. Give me some time to get back into the swing of things.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

yea go writers block, it's not awful but it's not not good, uhm impacting? Nicolesk? On par with your other works? Yea no matter how I say this it sounds mean uhm..... when in doubt be old school.......

do donu nu do donu nu do donu nu do donu nu........It's ok to tell me what you think about me, I won't try to argue or hold it against you, I know that you're leaving, you must have your reasons, the season is chaning, your pictures are falling down....the steps that i retrace, the sad look on your face, the timing, its structure, did you hear, he FUCKED her, a day late, a buck short, I'm writting the report, on losing and failing,when I move I'm flailing now..and it's happened once again, I'll turn into a friend, someone that understands and sees throught the master plan, when everybody's gone and you've been here for to long to face this on your own...well I guess this is growing up...do donu nu do do donu nu do do donu nu"

Love you
ash


Much Love

Ashley