Starstruck

It still hasn't sunk in completely,

 

The shock is so thick I could cut it with a knife.

 

A baby step the size of a gorge,

 

You did it. You did it all by yourself.

 

I'm so proud of you,

 

Happy for you,

 

Anxious to see how you handle all you've learned.

 

So many possibilities...

 

...again.

 

 

Chances and second chances,

 

I will never lose faith in you as long as you try.

 

 

XO

 

...I still can't believe it. 

I may have to scream in my pillow a few more times.

 

 

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SSmoothie's picture

What lovely sentiments! I

What lovely sentiments! I really enjoyed the joy in this piece dear! hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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That means a lot, Ssmoothie,

That means a lot, Ssmoothie, because you will be one out of a very select few that share as much joy as I have right now. Thanks for your read and comment. <3

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

bishu's picture

Amidst hundreds of accomplished poets feel so petty Respected D

Amidst hundreds of accomplished poets I feel so petty Respected Delight.But your "Starstruck" struck like a lightning bolt whipping me up from my sleepy pen.Specially liked the solidity of shock  & screaming in the pillow(so that no one hears it).Some of your words are Electifying Delight


©bishu 

 

nightlight1220's picture

Then we are in sync. I feel

Then we are in sync. I feel the same many times.

...thanks for all your reads and comments, bishu. They are all such a joy. You are a rare gem amongst the pebbles at the riverside in many ways. I notice everything. -peace-

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

bishu's picture

Babble babble the river flows over the pebbles

Babble babble the river flows over the pebbles smoothening them into shapes resembling works of art.In this part of the marsh humans believe that wearing gemstones changes destiny and bad stars into good.I am just too heavy to hang around with so Sealed


©bishu