The Pits

 

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 Life is a bowl

 

Of cherries with the pit,

 

Don't be scared, if you eat them,

 

They'll come out in your shit.

 
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2013
Author's Notes/Comments: 

Poetic realism.

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PeterChristopherRaymond's picture

Oh, wow!! It's beautifully

Oh, wow!! It's beautifully blunt. No minced words here. :)

Beavis's picture

;-)

;-)

bishu's picture

Newspapers in this marsh are screaming the bad news

Newspapers in this marsh are screaming the bad news......


©bishu 

 

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Yes...I must get out of these

Yes...I must get out of these stagnant waterways, Popeye. I agree!

:-D

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Bahahahahahahahahahaha! Love

Bahahahahahahahahahaha! Love it! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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If Bing could write that song

If Bing could write that song during the great depression...then my poem is good enough for a government shut down! Lol. Thanks for reading.

 

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=81WswKidRN4&desktop_uri=%2Fwatch%3Fv%3D81Ws...

 


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "