Author Information
As i pull the trigger
As I pull the trigger
An end to problems that will only grow bigger
Waiting to be buried by the gravedigger
With nothing left I end it all
As I become weak I fall
Like I am stuck behind a great wall
On the ground I begin to crawl
Reaching for the sky wishing I could stand tall
As I fall to the ground
My lifeless body lay without a sound
Hoping my soul will be found
To that which I am bound
There will be no second time around
What was meant to be
Will set me free
As I lay still I begin to bleed
Returning to the earth as the wolves begin to feed
One die’s for love another lives for greed
Feeling like I am god’s personal joke
As I begin to choke
Like my existence is a mistake
Everything seems so fake
Wondering what will happen with the next mess I make
Only so much more I can take
Driving me insane
Like a bullet to the brain
I flow down the drain
What could I possibly live to gain
Don’t know how much longer I can take the pain
My wrestless heart only one can tame
i really admire your poetry. my friend darby is also a super gamer and he writes poetry too. i hope u don't mind if i share your poem with him. im sure he'll be thrilled. i'll have him write down his comments and i'll just send them to you using my email.well, good luck with the rest of your poems :) ---tameka---
this is amazing! it is so powerfully angry! i like it:D i like it a lot:D. keep writing because you're very talented. I really like the lines "returning to the earth as the wolves begin to feed. one die's for love another lives for greed." mmm! thats good!:D