Not Quite There

She's drained, she's black and white

She's not even really there

They can all see she's fading

Just accept it, pass on by



She's something not quite solid

Seems to float upon the breeze

Ripples and rhythms of nothing

Only recognised subconciously



Can't quite see her, never hear her

She can't feel you, sees it all

Wouldn't care if she disappeared for a while

But you sure will miss her when she's dead and gone.

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Kris Hoffman's picture

you have to be the most talented writer on this site. AMAZING work. made me cry, your poems continue to amaze me all the time...no matter how many times i read them, a new door opens and i see it differently everytime. wow