Undecided

This Blood vomit explains

how my soul was disdained

it poured out in my heart

and went right through my veins



My feelings were uncertain

My tears were termed as rain

but when my heart was opened

all came out was just pain!


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Jan 02 -2009 8:19 p.m. for the pain in heart

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Afzal Shauq's picture

naushin ...well doen..its really a good poem with rich theme and sound effects... like it .. good to know it that you write good poetry... my poems are also there in postpoems... hope you go through and let me know with sweet comments... afzal shauq ... afzalshauq@yahoo.com
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