-----(4/15/05)

In the cold under a single street light

I sit; solitary.

Inhaling, my hatred for you.

Sucking down on a sweet black smoke

Almost as deadly as you.

Waiting patiently

As I exhale my life away.

The night has just begun

And yet Iā€™m already covered in blood.

Desire.

What have you done?

Discarded.

Forgotten.

Your need for me is like

A wasted day.

How I long desperately to be that black

Smoke exhaled

That is blown out into the cold

That the night carries off and away.

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Dan Cook's picture

That had alot of emotions,mostly hate in it!The poem has a great flow & unexpected trist right from the beginning!!I hope it's not true-sorry if it is-I wish you the best!!!

DAN!!!!

Dan Cook's picture

That had alot of emotions,mostly hate in it!The poem has a great flow & unexpected trist right from the beginning!!I hope it's not true-sorry if it is-I wish you the best!!!

DAN!!!!