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The Water's Edge
The water's edge
gliding lights around its fingers
charmed creatures beneath its serene appearance
The waves welcomed by the shore
innocent kisses on the earth
to touch Gaea's face
The water's edge
gliding lights around its fingers
charmed creatures beneath its serene appearance
The waves welcomed by the shore
innocent kisses on the earth
to touch Gaea's face
Now, to me, this is just brilliant..so short, yet so piercing in its images and ideas...the use of the "gaia" myth (being that there is life in the essence of the earth) instead of simply saying "earth"...well...very genuine. I enjoyed this one very much, as with the others by you I have read.
You say so much in such a short poem! Nice...very nice.
Kris
hi,
thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. i have read several of your pieces and enjoyed them all. keep writing.
gayle
Hey Pixie , this is the sprite...I have some poems posted some see.....hehe.....I like this poem.....simple yet elegant.